Pre-Production - Afterglow El Teen Turnaround and Expressions
After some consideration, I decided to have a major rewrite of my story, after feedback from practise pitches it was made clear that the story wasn't personal enough and often meant that the story felt very discounted. Taking this on board I rewrote the structure of my story, the new narrative now included another stage of Els like, her Teen years. With this in mind, I went away and did just as I did before creating a turn around and expression sheet for this stage of the character, I was much happier with the direction of my story.
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